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Votre famille

Describe your family. Do you have any brothers or sisters? Are they older or younger?

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Becky
J'ai deux freres dans ma famille et un pere et une mere. Un frere est plus jeunes et un autre est plus ages. Ma pere et me mere sont plus ages. J'aime ma famille beaucoup!
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Submitted: 2007-09-04 05:42:09



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  • 2007-09-05 02:13:09
    Erik.
    Wow Becky, two more verbs mastered, "avoir" and "aimer." Bravo! Since you have no problems with verbs and syntax, try to also keep up the good work and a keen eye for gender / number agreements. I was very impressed with your agreement the last time you used "âgés." Cultural Note: In French, even if a crowd has only 1 man for every 5 million women, we still use a masculine plural form! Grammar: This exercise is especially difficult and you did it quite well. Why? Because in it, one is prompted to not only make agreements with adjectives, but also possessive pronouns! That said, when talking about your brothers individually, remove the "s" on "jeune" and "âgé." Also, be careful to agree your possessive pronouns with their subject, "mon père" and "ma mère." Keep up the great writing. Can't wait to read more from you! e.
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