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Surprise Party

Gary Johnson went to work last Monday, as usual. He walked into the office, but nobody was there. He looked in the offices. He looked in the cafeteria. He looked in the employee bathrooms. He even looked in the basement. Gary didnt know what to do. He walked back to his office. The lights in his office were turned off. He turned on the lights and everybody he worked with yelled: Surprise! It was Garys birthday.

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elymar

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Submitted: 2008-10-11 04:57:17



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  • 2008-10-11 05:21:59
    gwerner
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    Sounds good. My only comments are to use a harder J sound in Johnson. It's not Yonson. Turned is pronounced turnd, not turn-ed.
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  • 2008-10-14 14:10:13
    Tim Johnson
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    Johnson Walked and looked. I am leaving an audio comment.
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  • 2008-10-14 14:21:26
    Brian
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