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Staying at a Hotel

Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.

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gily
In my country there are many mineral springs. Last months I stayed in a SPA complex "Katarino". It is situated in the foot of the beautiful Rila mountain. I went there with my son. He liked the heated indoor pool and I was glad that there is Internet access in our room. We did it walk with horses. I love rock climbing and nearby areas were suitable for this. It was a wonderful break but unfortunately onli for 3 days.
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Submitted: 2008-10-11 04:29:54



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  • 2008-10-11 04:39:05
    compass2k
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    CORRECTED:In my country there are many mineral springs. Last month(s) I stayed in a 'spa complex 'Katarino'. It is situated (in)*at the foot of the beautiful Rila mountain. I went there with my son. He liked the heated indoor pool and I was glad that there is Internet access in our room. We did rode(it walk with) horses. I love rock climbing and nearby areas were suitable for this. It was a wonderful break but unfortunately only for 3 days. Good: Note 'single quotes for quotations, "double quotes for quoting speech.
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  • 2008-10-11 05:20:07
    mikes75238
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    Nice work. compass2k made some good suggestions. I have nothing more to add.
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  • 2008-10-11 05:22:16
    Levon
    ... I was glad there WAS internet access... (because you used "I was" [Past Simple], other verbs have to agree with it in tense, therefore in this story "is" turns into "was", even though internet access is still available to this day). The word "internet" is lowercase. We rode horses. OR We walked with horses. ...onlY for 3 days. Very good!
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  • 2008-10-11 13:47:51
    geo
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    Great job as usual, Gily. I've made a couple of suggestions below. "In my country there are many mineral springs. Last MONTH I stayed in a SPA complex CALLED "Katarino". It is situated AT the foot of the beautiful Rila mountain. I went there with my son. He liked the heated indoor pool and I was glad that there WAS internet access in our room. We RODE horses. I love rock climbing and nearby areas were suitable for this. It was a wonderful break but unfortunately IT WAS ONLY for 3 days." You could also say "we went horseback riding". Nice work.
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  • 2008-10-11 13:57:13
    Veronica
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    Very good. A few things: at the foot Last month (it was just one month so keep it singular) You don't need to put Katanino in quotes. Just write..."a spa complex, Katanino. I was glad that there was (keep the tenses the same) We did it walk with horses? Do you mean we rode horses? only
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  • 2008-10-11 14:59:50
    Nadin
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    I was glad that there (was) Internet access... We had horseback riding. Very good, gily ! Keep going!
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  • 2008-10-14 22:47:04
    John
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    ... situated at the foot of the beautiful Rila mountain. ...We rode on horses.. only Excellent job!!! Very few mistakes, keep up the great work!!
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