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Describing Objects
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
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Еιелα

Еιелα
The managers are at the table.The flowers are in the box.The man is on the table.The girls are in the car.The flower is on the table.The woman is in the chair.The men are on the couch.The candy is on the table.The lamp is on the table.
Submitted: 2008-10-11 04:29:53
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2008-10-11 05:14:22mikes75238Average rating:
Excellent. I have two suggestions. First, say "The man is sitting at the table", instead of "The man is on the table". Second, leave a space following your periods. Like this. See :-)
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