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What are people doing?

Using both positive and negative attributes, describe what six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed.

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Jair Pedro Monacelli
A woman is eating the food in the table. A man is eating the food in the table. A gilr is eating the food in the table. A boy is eating the food in the table. I m eating the food in the table. You are eating the food in the table. I m eating the food in the table. I m not sleeping on the bed.
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Submitted: 2008-09-07 01:59:29



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  • 2008-09-07 02:45:27
    Mai
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    Well done! I think you should use "on the table"
    Keep it up.
    Good luck!^^
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