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Describing People
Using both a positive and a negative attribute, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The man is not rich. He is poor.
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Danilo Fahl

Danilo Fahl
The woman is not fat, she is thin.
The men is rich, he is not poor.
The boy is not short, he is tall.
The girl is young, she is not old.
You are thin, you are not fat.
I am a man, i am not a woman.
Submitted: 2008-09-07 01:58:12
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2008-09-07 02:53:43khrissty31Average rating:
Very good. The mAn is rich, he is not poor. Always capitalize 'I'. -
2008-09-07 02:54:49MaiAverage rating:
"The MAN is rich, he is not poor." Well done! Keep it up. Good luck!^^
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