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Describing the weather

Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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ivàn
Today it's warm and sunny. The people need shorts and sunglasses. The day before yesterday it was cloudy and raining. The boy needs a raincoat and a hat. Yesterday it was hot. The girl needs a sunglasses. Tomorrow It will be snowing and cloudy. I'm need a scarf and a hat.
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Submitted: 2008-08-22 02:16:31



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  • 2008-08-22 02:22:31
    Trixie Reus
    Good! For your last sentence though, you should say "I'm going to need a scarf and a hat."

    "Going to" refers to what you are about to do, or what you have not done yet but will be doing :)
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  • 2008-08-22 20:28:22
    Karla Rivera
    The day before yesterday was cloudy and rainy. ... The girl needs sunglasses. ...I'm going to need a scarf and a hat.
    Very good, not bad. Keep up the good work!
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