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Going on Vacation

Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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I want to go to Beijing to enjoy The Olympic Games .There must be very beautiful. I prode of being chinese and I think that we can do the best. So, I make a decide that I will go there in the two days, and by the way, I will go to Beijing to visit some place of historical interest

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Submitted: 2008-08-22 01:58:50

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2008-08-22 03:08:58
Tania

I want to go to Beijing to enjoy The Olympic Games. It must be very beautiful. I am proud of being Chinese and I think that we can do the best that we can. I am making the decision of going there in the next two days. I will also go to Beijing to visit some historical places.

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