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People’s Possessions

Using one positive and one negative attribute, describe six people (a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you, and me) and the items they have. Ex. The woman’s coins are silver. They are not gold.

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suzanete
the house of woman is not red, she is yellow the man is not blue, it is brown my car is red, is not black the coin of woman are silver. it is not gold i am a flower orange, it is not purple my truck it is not whait, it is black what the color your eyes?
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Submitted: 2008-08-22 01:57:17



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  • 2008-08-29 11:31:38
    Rafael Belizári...
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    Hi Suzanete, just few mistakes in your sentence:

    "The woman's house is not red, it's yellow. The man is not blue, it's brown. My car is red, it is not black. The woman's coin is silver, it's not gold.

    My truck it's not white, it's black. What is the color of your eyes?

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