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Describing Objects and their Locations

Describe the locations of a set of people and objects. Describe each. EX. The woman is on the yellow couch. She is not in the brown chair.

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wdlwdl1982
The man is on the couch,he is not in the brown chair. i am in the bed ,iam not at the table. the women are on the bus ,they are not in the car. the lamp is on the table,it is not at the table . the towels are on the table,they are not on the bed. the candy is on the table ,it is not in the car. the beautiful woman is on the yellow couch,shi is not in the black chair. my cup is on the white table ,it is not on the silver table. the flowers are in the gold vase ,they are not in the purple vase. the money is in the vallet,it is not in my purse. the mechanic is on the bus ,he is not in the car. the police man is at the building ,he is not on the building. the chef is at the table ,he is not in the chair. the scientist is in the chair ,he is not at the lamp. the secretary is at the table,she is not in the white car.
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Submitted: 2008-08-22 00:48:58



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  • 2008-08-28 22:56:33
    Donald
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    Excellent work! Pay attention to capitalization and punctuation. Some details: "...at the table" is proper for people, when they are using the table (or chairs, when they are placed for use at the table), but not for other objects - use "beside (by, near) the table"; "she"; "wallet"; "...at the building" is proper sometimes, but in contrast to "...on the building" use "...in the building"; "...in the chair, he is not by the lamp". This is close to being perfect, really, just a few mistakes :-)
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