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People’s Possessions

Using one positive and one negative attribute, describe six people (a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you, and me) and the items they have. Ex. The woman’s coins are silver. They are not gold.

My house is big and green, It is not new, the front door is white, It have two trees in the front, There are not flowers. But for me It is so beautiful.
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Submitted: 2008-07-05 17:51:09



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  • Chynna - 2008-07-05 19:40:00
    Very good!!!
    Suggestions:
    1. The front door is white.
    2. It has two trees in the front. 
    3. But for me, it is so beautiful.
     

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