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At the café.

Describe what you order at a café. What is your favorite drink? Do you order a sandwich or pastry?

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roya
My favorit drink is tea. What kind tea do you drink?black tea or green tea? black tea please small or large? I would like drink small black tea Here go thank you how much is it? 1 doller please
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Submitted: 2007-12-19 00:59:51



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  • 2007-12-19 01:02:01
    gbrite
    don't forget little words like "a" or "of"
    eg: "I would like 'a' drink"
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  • 2007-12-19 01:16:47
    jdu007
    Roya, nice job - here is your submission with a few small corrections for you to compare:
    My favorite drink is tea.
    What kind do you drink, black or green tea?
    Black tea, please.
    Small or large?
    I would like a small black tea.
    Here you go.
    Thank you, how much is it?
    One dollar please.
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  • 2007-12-19 03:28:33
    Courtney
    My favorite drink is tea.  I like to order a small, black tea.  For this, I pay one dollar.

    Good work, keep up the practice.
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