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At the café.

Describe what you order at a café. What is your favorite drink? Do you order a sandwich or pastry?

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chiex
I order "soy latte" with double or triple shots. It is not like I care about health, but I just love soy milk. Also, adding shots makes the drink bitter and tasty. I don't usually order food with coffee. But only when I feel a little bit tired, I take some sweet stuff such as chocolates and cookies because they relieve my tiredness somehow.
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Submitted: 2007-10-30 05:59:45



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  • 2007-11-03 13:16:15
    curacaokev
    Did you mean "bitter" or "better"? both words are CORRECT ENGLISH, but I don't know what you were trying to say, that's all =)
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  • 2007-11-03 15:05:26
    chiex
    Thanks for your comment.
    I mean "bitter" as it is.
    But either is ok because bitter&tasty coffee is better anyway :)
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  • 2007-11-03 19:08:58
    thegreatgate
    I take some sweet stuff such as chocolates and cookies because they relieve my tiredness somehow.
    Better to say: I also get some sweets, usually chocolate and/or cookies because it wakes me up. Or if you really want to say "it relieves my tiredness", it might sound better to say it relieves me of my (exhaustion or fatigue).
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