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Décrire les gens

Using both a positive and a negative attribute, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The man is not rich. He is poor.

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nabeelzafar
Je ne suis pas une femme. Je suis un homme. Je suis grand. Je ne suis pas est petit Je ne suis pas vieux. Je suis jeune
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Submitted: 2008-02-21 11:31:24



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  • 2008-02-21 12:07:48
    astroborg
    That's very good ! The only mistake was "Je ne suis pas est petit" which literally means "I am not is small". You should say: "Je ne suis pas petit".
    Keep up the good work !!
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  • 2008-02-21 12:20:53
    nabeelzafar
    Thank you Astroborg for viewing my submission. I appreciate that
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  • 2008-02-21 16:01:43
    ioannis damaski...
    I totally agree with the very good observetions of Astroborg. you should write, when it is possible, with a more complex organization of sentences.
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  • 2008-02-26 14:46:44
    monsieur
    Well done!
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