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Describing Hairstyles

Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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yingying
The young girl does not have short red hair, she has long red hair. The old man does not have a black beard ,he has a brown beard. The boy who is on the couch has long brown hair , he does not have short black hair. The men who are at the table do not have hair, they are bald. The woman who is on the car have straight long hair, she does not have curly black hair.The beautiful girl has blonde long hair .
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Submitted: 2008-10-12 11:49:26



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  • 2008-10-12 12:30:40
    robert
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    Very good !
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  • 2008-10-12 16:33:37
    Heri Zhang 和利
    Great!! ^^
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  • 2008-10-12 22:39:57
    Santo Ádamo
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    Very good girls!!! Congratulations!!!
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  • 2008-10-12 22:40:55
    Santo Ádamo
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    Very good girls!!! Congratulations!!!
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  • 2008-10-14 00:16:36
    Jimmy
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    Nice piece of work except you could have written 'The woman in the car has straight long hair', my humble advice: always check subject verb agreement, okay ladies? Jay
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