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Staying at a Hotel

Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.

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王昱晴
I'm checking in at the reception desk of the Swiss Hotel. I'm on the business. I booked a standant room.I will use the computer inside.I'll having breakfast in bed.
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Submitted: 2008-09-28 13:41:35



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  • 2008-09-30 08:20:36
    rlhugo
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    Hi, The question is asked in the past tense, describe a time you stayed.............. Your answer is in the present and future tense. Don't worry too much about this, it is an easy mistake to make. Your first sentence, fine, second sentence, the word 'the' is not needed. I booked a standard room. I will use the computer inside. I will have breakfast in bed. So, leave a space after a full stop. The spelling of the word 'standard'. The use of the word 'inside', do you mean you will use the computer provided by the hotel which is inside the room? If so you could have said 'I will use the computer provided in the room'. Finally, I'll having is not good English. I will be having or I will have.breakfast in bed.
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