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Morning Routine
Describe your morning routine. Do you drink coffee? Take your car to get gas? Watch TV?
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Luis Enrique

Luis Enrique
Hello,
My day was very boring... I woke up around 11 a.m. and I had a breakfast... I went out to the theatre and then I went to the disco in the night yesterday, so I woke up today feeling a little tired. On sunday, I usually wash my clothes, prepare something to eat and clean my house... becouse Sunday is the only one day that I can do it. Ok, this is my sunday morning routine.
Submitted: 2008-09-21 22:42:30
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2008-09-22 08:15:49BronitaAverage rating:
Very good, only a couple of small points. I had a breakfast = 'I had breakfast' (without the 'a') I went to the disco in the night yesterday = 'I went to the disco last night' well done -
2008-09-22 11:50:29Nellie GardnerAverage rating:
My day was very boring. I woke up around 11 a.m. and I had breakfast. I went to the theatre and then I went to the disco last night so I woke up today feeling a little tired. On Sunday, I usually wash my clothes, prepare something to eat and clean my house because Sunday is the only day that I can do it. This is my Sunday morning routine. -
2008-09-22 16:27:18JoyceeDaneAverage rating:
Good job. The above reviewers gave good corrections. :)
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