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描述天气

何时出太阳,何时天气暖和,女孩何时戴太阳镜。 天冷时,男孩戴帽子披围巾。 今天天气阴沉,要下雪了。 星期六要下雨。

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David
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Submitted: 2008-09-07 20:50:25



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  • 2008-09-08 02:32:14
    genie
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    I think you did a good job!
    but 下's pronunciation is "xia"  not "sha",and 雪's pronunciation is  "xue" not "shuo"
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  • 2008-09-08 02:48:42
    fly in sky
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    写的很好,继续努力啊
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  • 2008-09-08 05:39:04
    suge110
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    good.!
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  • 2008-09-08 08:23:07
    RICHARD
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    good
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  • 2008-09-13 14:52:37
    兰色幽霞
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    good job!
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  • 2008-09-19 04:58:09
    hatty
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    good!
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  • 2008-09-26 06:24:58
    豆豆猪
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    David, 总的来说发音不错,只有”暖“和”雪“的发音有待改善哦!You did a good job!Come on!
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  • 2008-10-14 19:20:54
    Yu
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    暖和 ,雪,those two words need practice more. very good job
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  • 2008-10-31 14:17:30
    helen
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    you should pay more attention to your tone,anyway good jod!keep try
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  • 2008-11-21 07:02:11
    好好
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    慢慢来,您还可以更好!
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  • 2008-11-21 14:10:53
    Taiwan Shmily
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    not bad!!
    keep practicing.
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