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Describing People

Using two attributes each, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.

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oviedos
this person is me, i am a man and rich, and thin , and young !
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Submitted: 2008-01-24 15:38:26



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  • 2008-01-31 22:30:33
    hiro
    Well done! I prefer the sentences below. Check out you use a capital letter at the beginning of sentences and "and" only once when you describe with several kinds of adjectives :-)
    This person is me. I am a man, rich, thin AND young.
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