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Going on Vacation

Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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Barbieri
On my next vacation, I will go to other planet to discover life out of the Earth.
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Submitted: 2008-08-22 01:28:29



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  • 2008-08-22 17:47:32
    orangelikechaos
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    That's funny, I like that. There seems to be a better way you could have phrased that to make it sound a bit more clear. Like, "I will go to outer space and discover life on another planet."
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