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Describing Objects

Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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mbignardi
Two candles red. These are red, not are yellow. One Flower. This is one, not are two. He is rich. The man has one car red, two car blue, five car yellow. Saven cakes and eleven candles.
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Submitted: 2008-08-20 04:01:14



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  • 2008-08-20 08:47:58
    吉米
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    maybe "two candles are red. " "two of them are blue ,the others are yellow" are better
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