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Going on Vacation

Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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ROSALINDA
I am going at beach december this year, and with my family, at house of sister. We will drinking ant will eating in Christmas and New Year.
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Submitted: 2008-08-18 00:40:48



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  • 2008-08-18 00:48:22
    artemis
    I'm not sure exactly what you're trying to say in some parts here because some words seem to be missing, so I'm rewriting based on my guesses: I am going to the beach in December this year with my family. We are staying at my sister's house. We will be celebrating Christmas and New Year there. We will be drinking and eating together. Keep going!
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