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Going Shopping
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
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happyflower

happyflower
I went shopping a few days ago. I bought many things,Such as a soap , a pipe of toothpaste and so on. They cost me 20RMB.
Submitted: 2008-08-17 15:00:08
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2008-08-17 16:52:37edwardAverage rating:
Good, ---tube of toothpaste-- Even though there are three separate questions I think you could answer in one flowing sentence. When I went shopping a few days ago for soap, toothpaste, and such items it cost me 20 RMB. I think you are doing really well ,jia you jia you. -
2008-08-17 19:40:33Centurion 1st C...
I went shopping a few days ago. I bought many things, such as soap, a tube of toothpaste, and so on. Altogether, they cost me 20RMB. -
2008-08-19 14:39:29Chaiyakorn
Good!! -
2008-11-04 19:40:18EdithAverage rating:
I like Centurion comment except there is no need to put a 'comma' between the last two items as they are connected by the word 'and'. But don't worry, you will only get better by getting constructive reviews. Good day.
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