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Staying at a Hotel
Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.
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mishaikh
mishaikh
A Marketing Conference was arranged to be held in Lahore, and I was instructed by the director Marketing to attend the conference, so it was a business trip. I sent my requst for room reservation Pearl Continental Hotel one day before my flight to Lahore. I sent my reservation request through fax as well as through e-mail to reserve single room for two nights. Next day by noon I reached Lahore. PC's Pick n drop coaster was waiting for me. It took me to the hotel within 15 minutes. Just after setteling in the room I took a worm shower and later on I ordered room service to sent me lunch. Since I reached the hotel by noon so there was no breakfast to be served, but ofcourse next day I ordered breakfast in bed.
The conference held for two days, I was to stay in the hotel for two nights. Pearl Continental Hotel Lahore is a 5 Star hotel and a beautiful too. Though it was my businss trip but because of the nice hotel I enjoyed this trip very much.
Submitted: 2008-08-09 18:45:46
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Your photo is very nice.
Is this photo of your young age ? kidding.
hahahahaha.
Have you heard a saying even used in India
a very old Urdu saying SATAH AUR PATAH BRABAR HOTAI HAIN.
SATAH 60
PATAH CHILD
HA HA HA
Thanks any way
Nice job.
Better: "A Marketing Conference was - to be held in Lahore, and I was instructed by the director <m>arketing to attend the conference, so it was a business trip. I sent my <request> for room reservation <at> Pearl Continental Hotel one day before my flight to Lahore. I sent my reservation request through fax as well as through e-mail to reserve single room for two nights. Next day by noon I reached Lahore. PC's pick n drop coaster was waiting for me. It took me to the hotel within 15 minutes. Just after <getting settled> in the room I took a worm shower and later on I ordered room service to sent me the lunch. Since I reached the hotel by noon, so there was no breakfast to be served, but <of course> next day I ordered breakfast in bed.
The <was> conference held for two days, I was to stay in the hotel for two nights. Pearl Continental Hotel, Lahore, is a 5 Star hotel and a beautiful too. Though it was my <business> trip but because of the nice hotel I enjoyed this trip very much."
KUCH SOCH KAR HI MAIN NAI TUMHAIN APNAI NAQEDEEN KE FEHRIST MAIN SHAMIL KYA THA, AUR MAIRA ANDAZA SAHI NIKLA.
KUSH RAHO
mishaikh
It should be "The conference <was>..."
(last paragraph)
Pl also see my two latest submissions
mi