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What can and can’t they do?

Write a list of rules using the vocabulary from this lesson. EX. 1. You can’t smoke in the park. 2. You can park at the restaurant but not at the library.

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hadji
- You can drink this water but you can't drink the water there . it's not safe. - You are not allowed to drink or eat in the library . - You can not use the camera here. - You can not smok in public places. - You 've got to switch off your cell phone on meeting. - You can not keep wild animal - You can travel without passport inside your country but not outside.
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Submitted: 2008-08-09 18:18:55



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  • 2008-08-09 19:00:22
    Philippe
    Good work A few corrections follow.
    - You can not SMOKE in public places.
    - You 've got to switch off your cell phone IN  MEETINGS
    - You can not keep  wild ANIMALS
    You can travel without passport inside your country but not outside. In other words YOU DO NOT NEED A PASSPORT TO TRAVEL IN YOUR COUNTRY BUT YOU DO NEED ONE TO TRAVEL ABROAD.
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  • 2008-08-09 20:52:03
    Glenn
    Very good mon amie!
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  • 2008-08-10 18:44:36
    wordshark
    Hi Hadji
    Just a few corrections:

    - You can not smoke in public places.
    - You've got to switch off your cell phone in meetings.
    - You can not keep wild animals.
    - You can travel without a passport inside your country but not outside.

    Other than those small things, very good.
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