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Going on Vacation

Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

My vacation went in September twenty-second. I like a lot, because i was very tired. My mother went with me, and we're ran at the beach, ate cake, bought clothes and drank very water. At night, we're sat at the beach and ate ice cream. We're slept early. My vacations went better.
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Submitted: 2008-08-05 16:14:44

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