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How many objects?

Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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ROSALINDA
The woman has five red flowers and two yellow candles. In the table are fifty-three candy whit sixty dishes and eight candles. Inside the house are seventy people: twenty girls, eleven women, fifteen boys and twenty four men.
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Submitted: 2008-08-11 23:20:10



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  • 2008-08-07 20:31:34
    artemis
    Hola, Rosalinda! I have some suggestions again: The woman has one BOOK and ten pencils. He has three candles and two FLOWERS. The boy HAS six CAKES and seven apples. I have DONE nine years and six months OF work. I have DONE one month and three weekS of STUDYING English. The boys HAVE DONE eleven months and five days of school. The cat is five days OLD. Keep going!
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  • 2008-08-12 00:25:42
    artemis
    Hello again, Rosalinda! I wonder why my old comment on another exercise is appearing here. Good work! Just one small change: ...On the table are fifty-three candies with... Keep it up!
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  • 2008-09-13 12:26:06
    Angela Giacomin...
    Hola Rosalinda ? Como estás ? Mira las correciones: The woman has five red flowers and two yellow candles. There are fifty-three candies with sixty dishes and eight candles on the table. Inside the house there are seventy people: twenty girls, eleven women, fifteen boys and twenty four men. Mui bien !!
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