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Describiendo personas
Describe six different people, using two descriptive words each: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and tall.
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Shirish

Shirish
Ella mujer es delgada
El hombre es alto
El nino es bajo
Eres pobre
Soy joven
Submitted: 2008-07-30 04:31:15
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2008-07-30 15:19:01Florencia
ESTA BIEN SOLO QUE NO DESCRIBISTE CORRECTAMENTE TE PIDE QUE DES 2 ATRIBUTOS A CADA UNA DE LAS PERSONAS Y UNA CORRECCION LA MUJER Y NO ELLA MUJER. -
2008-07-31 00:21:08Erik.
Good job Shirish, this looks great. Although not a native speaker of Spanish, I might point out that ella is not an article, it is a subject. The correct article for "mujer" would be "la." The rest, despite lacking punctuation, looks good! Best of luck to you!
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