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描述物体及其位置

Describe the locations of a set of people and objects. Describe each. EX. The woman is on the yellow couch. She is not in the brown chair.

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nhatnam
你们好! 我是越南人。我想学中国话,这是使命 我要要努力学习很好。谢谢。
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Submitted: 2008-07-17 03:23:11



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  • 2008-07-17 04:38:59
    pauline
    修改意见:我是越南人。我想学中国话,我要努力学习,争取学得很好,这是我的目标。谢谢。
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  • 2008-07-17 05:07:58
    lee
    还可以
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  • 2008-07-17 06:53:06
    jr188
    给你一些小小的修改: 你们好!我是越南人,我想学中国话,我要努力学好它,这是我的目标。谢谢。
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  • 2008-07-17 07:35:30
    le
    我是越南人。我想学中国话,这是使命, 我要努力学习把中文学好。 你的中国话说的蛮好,请继续努力.
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  • 2008-07-17 07:36:26
    le
    我是越南人。我想学中国话,这是使命, 我要努力学习把中文学好。 你的中国话说的蛮好,请继续努力.
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  • 2008-07-17 08:50:56
    Ngoc
    很好! 大有進步了, 你朋友的意見很好, 繼續努力! But you have not describe yourself, 你的頭髮長或短? 是甚麼顏色? 你有鬍鬚嗎?
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  • 2008-07-17 11:58:33
    linda
    You did a good job!"我要努力学好汉语"
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  • 2008-07-18 01:42:35
    trista
    很好!你的朋友们都给了很好的建议。加油哦!
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  • 2008-07-21 02:33:00
    樱桃
    加油.相信你一定是最棒的.只要努力就会有回报的.我要学习英语,一定要学好.我们一起加油.GO.GO.加油.
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  • 2008-08-03 13:35:40
    nhatnam
    Xie xie ni men hao!
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  • 2008-08-06 01:43:43
    Vani
    hello. Do it again. Write some line about yourself. At least You could write; I am a boy. Colour of your airs. Etc.
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  • 2008-09-26 13:35:24
    nhatnam
    Excuse me! I am working away from my home, I haven't a private computer of mine for the present time. That's difficult thing for my study in chinese. Understand me now, I will try hard to learn when I come back my home in a near day. Thanks, your attentions paied to me!
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