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At the park.

Describe what you do at the park. Do you play sports? Do you read?

I like play sports.I go for a run every morning except raining.
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Submitted: 2008-07-12 09:28:36



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  • 2008-08-16 14:22:57
    Golden Sands
    Well Done!
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  • 2008-10-20 01:39:02
    Jimmy
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    Good try happyflower, notice the following differences: 'I like play sports.' 'I like playing sports.' Other examples: 'I like playing football.' 'I like swimming.' 'I like visiting my friends.' 'I go for a run every morning except raining.' 'I go for a run every morning except when it rains.' or 'I jog every morning, weather permitted.' What about 'Do you read?' Keep up the good work. J
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  • 2008-11-04 00:51:50
    Edith
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    I like playing sports. I go running every morning except on rainy days. I read..... Good try.
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