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Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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Bill
ni hao. 我的书桌上有一台电脑, 电话,书籍, 笔和纸. xie xie.
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Submitted: 2008-07-09 00:46:33



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  • 2008-07-09 01:15:44
    Chynna
    Congratulations! You did a very good job as a beginner! 1.This topic is based on the vocabulary and sentence patterns in Unit 2-1.(subject+在+place) 2. You use them to write about the topic in Chinese. 3. Your writing is concise, fluent, perfect and comprehensible。 5. It is amazing that you use “place +有+objects" very well. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you！ 非常好! 您能用汉语清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内外的知识，创造中文句子。您使用的课文的句型和词汇很正确。在课内知识基 础上，您学习了其他的中文表达法，丰富了您的汉语知识。非常感谢您。继续努力！
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  • 2008-07-09 01:19:00
    Chynna
    Here is my audio recording for "1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10". yī'èr sān sì wǔ liù qī bā jiǔ shí 一 二 三 四 五 六 七 八 九 十
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  • 2008-07-09 02:09:38
    金哲希
    你的书桌上东西还满丰富的哦
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  • 2008-07-09 06:14:18
    China-Sharon
    你好.谢谢!
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  • 2008-07-10 04:53:48
    leon
    Nice.
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