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描述物体

Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative attributes. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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Bill
Nihua. 我是一个核电工程师. 当我是孩子的时候,我的梦想工作是航空公司飞行员. Xiexie.
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Submitted: 2008-07-03 01:50:23



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  • 2008-07-03 02:42:28
    Air
    你好.你的中文很棒!
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  • 2008-07-03 02:43:25
    玥玓瓅
    你好=nǐ hǎo
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  • 2008-07-03 02:49:32
    Tiyanna(HQ)
    把我的梦想工作是航空公司飞行员改成我的梦想是当一名飞行员会比较好。
    附加问题：请问你是哪里人啊？
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  • 2008-07-03 03:44:18
    rory
    good ，你中文不错，继续努力
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  • 2008-07-03 07:47:01
    Deena
    wo yao he ni xue guang dong hua.
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  • 2008-07-03 20:47:45
    Chynna
    Fantastic, congratulations! Unit 1-6 provides the sample Chinese sentences."我是..." You are able to use wonderful Chinese characters to write about the topic. Your writing is concise, fluent， beautiful, perfect and comprehensible, especially " 当我是孩子的时候," is correctly put before the main sentence.  You may also get benefits from other helpful comments. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up.  Best wishes to you！

    非常好! 您能用汉语文字清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内的知识，创造中文句子。您使用的课文的词汇很正确. 在课内知识基础上，您学习了其他的中文表达法，丰富了您的汉语知识。非常感谢您。继续努力！
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