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Clothes Shopping

Mrs. Smith went shopping yesterday. She wanted to buy a new dress and a present for her son. She looked at many different dresses. She did not like the yellow dress or the blue dress. She decided to buy a red dress. She paid about 200 dollars for it. She did not know what to buy her son. She looked at some sweaters, shirts, and pants. She looked at a new soccer ball, but she didnt buy it. Instead, Mrs. Smith bought her son a new watch.

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Chynna
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Submitted: 2008-06-18 20:13:56



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  • 夕阳美/April - 2008-06-20 05:56:33
    Excellent !
    I like to listen to it very much.
     
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  • dip - 2008-06-20 14:46:35
    Hello chynna , your submission is well.
     
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  • Ayten - 2008-06-20 14:51:49
    Good work.
     
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  • dream - 2008-06-22 14:14:00
    well done
     
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  • woshiwenzy - 2008-06-26 10:53:15
    Your voice sounds like a young woman, very soft and tender.
     
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  • hsjhyr - 2008-06-26 12:40:28
    Hello!
    You did a pefect job!
    Thanks for your help!
     
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  • Lingvo_Amato - 2008-06-28 17:20:27
    Good effort!
     
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  • JB - 2008-06-30 01:26:24
    Excellent!
     
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  • lvy - 2008-07-15 08:19:28
    Thank you for doing a very good job .
     
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  • oldzhu - 2008-07-19 02:22:33
    Is preposition "for" omitted in the sentense--Mrs Smith bought (for) son a new watch, or is simply  unneccessary. Thanks.
     
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  • Kejope - 2008-07-19 05:05:57
    Very good.  I can understand you well.
    Some of your individual words would sound much better if you cut away some of the consonant sounds.  For example:  in "went shopping" and "different dresses," the "t" should be very soft.

    Pretend that you are not allowed to say the full "t" sound; you are allowed to say half of the "t" sound, but then you must hold your tongue still and hold your breath for a moment.  Then, you must continue without completing the "t" sound, like this:  "wenT"  "went"  "went shopping"  "differenT"  "different"  "different dresses"  (I tap the microphone while I hold my breath.)

    Now I will read the text:
     
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  • Juan Do - 2008-07-28 00:28:03
    you eated a lot of words, and the ones you eated, you put them in were they don't have to go, keep an eye on that
     
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